a kiss then we part
drop a tear and bid adieu
shall be missing you
gone, flitted away
now my days are nights to see
'til I can see thee
absence becomes sweet
knowing in few months we'll meet
so I hope and wish
drop a tear and bid adieu
shall be missing you
gone, flitted away
now my days are nights to see
'til I can see thee
absence becomes sweet
knowing in few months we'll meet
so I hope and wish
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17 comments:
Parting is such sweet sorrow!
Great Ku, very poetic.
flitted away... isn't that the way it seems when we must part.
Awww... great haiku... appopriate to so many situation.
That was a beautiful haiku! It takes me back.
Great job!
What a beautiful haiku.
Mariposa, you made it to my Top 10 this month (check here).
Thank you!
Shakespeare reminds us
parting is a ‘sweet sorrow’ …
as does your Haiku
Hugs and blessings,
lovely.
Sad, but very beautiful. Nice work.
That is a lovely Haiku, very emotional and easy to empathize with.
:) grey so not poetic :D
Your haiku sounds Shakespearean! :)
Great haiku! I can relate so very much and look forward to seeing my man after far too long.
Very pretty! I like it...I'm not talented at that. In fact I feigned cramps all through poetry in Jr High.
Well, I figured it worked in Gym..why not English class?
Parting is always hard. The thought of meeting again brings hope.
Thanks for sharing this. Have a great weekends!
it's lovely! it's been a long since i last came here, sorry busy eh. i hope you're doing well :)
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