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Friday, May 30, 2008

Love Come...

beautiful and calm,
like the misty rains pouring
softly, LOVE has come

flowing so gently
but flooding the river, our LOVE
has become madness

what is not madness
cannot be called LOVE, they say
this must be LOVE, huh?!

you said you LOVE me
tell me not in crafted words
why do you LOVE me?


...and Go


since the day you left
every day is a torment
a ceaseless waiting

the torment it reaks
affects me in many ways
that's how much you're missed!

hunger for your LOVE
is worst than hunger for bread
please come and fill me





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27 comments:

Melissa said...

Well done! Excellent job of capturing the emotions of the moment. :)

Sandy C. said...

WOW- What a powerful Haiku. Your Ku's always blow me away with the level of emotion you manage exude from just a few lines. Well done!

I hope this time has come and passed.

maggie's mind said...

Wow, really amazing and powerful and painful. I'm blown away.

Jenny said...

This is so beatiful. I love it. Love is indeed a powerful thing, and it's easy to question it. I feel this way too. I ask myself why the people who are there for me and love me, really love me. I want their love, cause I feel so lost and empty without it.
This is from a favorite song of mine, which I find really remarkable in this case: "When your love lets you go you only want love more
even when love, was not what you were looking for."

wright said...

That is beautiful and tragic. Wonderfully done.

Phyl said...

Beautiful! I have sooo lived those words.

I have not seen the love of my life in 25 years...he is coming here in July!!!

McMama said...

Those are excellent and beautiful.

anglophilefootballfanatic said...

Absence does make the heart grow fonder, no? I did LD with my hubby for four years. I totally get it. Beautiful.

Laura@Storytellin' Mama said...

Beautiful and poignant!

Harmony said...

Beautiful hiaku!! Thanks for sharing :)

Karen of Sillymonkeez said...

That was so well-written! Thanks for visiting me this week. Hope you have a great weekend!!

courtneyryan369 said...

beautifully written...we've all been there a time or two - no?

thanks for coming by, hope you return again!

Eve said...

You made me cry. But then - it's that kind of day.

Jen of A2eatwrite said...

Wonderful haiku!

MsLittlePea said...

ouch. It pinched me :O)

the planet of janet said...

wow. very powerful words, hon.

storyteller said...

poignant ‘ku evokes
memories within my soul
love embraced and lost

Thanks for sharing such a powerful piece or writing today … and for visiting both of my Haiku Friday/OSI posts earlier. I can’t believe I’m just starting to visit others at 5pm … and think I’ll be turning off the computer soon … just because. Tomorrow is another day ;--)
Hugs and blessings,

ya ya's mom said...

wow, that's all i can say

beth said...

Very powerful. Excellent ku!

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Saiyo said...

I hope that you get the answer to your last haiku in Love Come...and that it feeds you like your last haiku in ....and Go.

karisma said...

Hugs missy!

Did you and It guy have a tiff? Just askin' not like you to miss Fun Monday and well the poems had me suspicious from the start! Ive been back 10 times in the last couple of days!

karisma said...

You know I have never liked this style of poetry but my word, when you write from the heart like that! It is indeed beautiful! Look to the sky and find peace my friend!

Grey said...

Awww ! that touched my heart

Miguel e Juliana said...

Beautiful poetry, beautiful is the love.

Kisses
Your friends
Miguel e Juliana

brocasarea said...

very good poem..very much true....have come across such feelings many times!!

Bipolar Wellness Writer said...

Very nicely written! I agree with Maggie that it is powerful and painful, but such a satisfying read!

Susan