early morning talks
a million word discussion
distance unites us
your touch is gentle
as you explore the layers
of my rhythmic heart
it wasn't enough
a glance...then i see you go
it just breaks my heart
a note to myself -
it's hard to be fabulous
when so much goes wrong
so stop denying
you love him and no one else
hearts can never lie
a million word discussion
distance unites us
your touch is gentle
as you explore the layers
of my rhythmic heart
it wasn't enough
a glance...then i see you go
it just breaks my heart
a note to myself -
it's hard to be fabulous
when so much goes wrong
so stop denying
you love him and no one else
hearts can never lie
Happy Friday everyone...wish you all a meaningful weekend!
Please don't forget to visit other people's wonderful haiku at A Mommy Story!
17 comments:
wow
very good Mari, powerful!
Hey loved the poem. Kp it comin dear.Happy Friday to u as well....
Just loved this on so many levels. Beautiful but sad feeling too.
Beautiful haiku this week!
Very touching.
Wow, this really made me think of how I felt when I first met my boyfriend. Really good work!!!
lovely lines..
~~a note to myself -
it's hard to be fabulous
when so much goes wrong~~
how true..!!
Beautiful haiku! It makes me hope things work out. :)
What a beautiful poem! You are an amazing writer. :)
fantastic.
Very beautiful and haunting. Have a wonderful weekend.
Wow, beautiful 'ku!
You DO have a way with HAIKU ;--)
Sorry to have been a stranger this week, but I enjoyed all 5 posts just now and just wanted to say I’m glad you’re ‘blogging’ regularly again. Hope you’re having a delightful day.
Hugs and blessings,
Happy Friday to you too...hope you have a wonderful weekend!
Very nice wish. You also good and enjoyable weekend.
lovely lines. :)
Just fluttered by to say hello. So glad I did. Your beautiful "hi-koo" was delightful. You must be a poet...did you know it?
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