had life been concise
i'd be counting one to ten
with the universe
had life been precise
things will be in equations
and in absolutes
had life been more fair
i would have existed not
in unspoken word
i heard the sound of
the last chime as it echoes
in my whole being
there was silence, then
time ceases to exist, i
turned a year older
i'd be counting one to ten
with the universe
had life been precise
things will be in equations
and in absolutes
had life been more fair
i would have existed not
in unspoken word
i heard the sound of
the last chime as it echoes
in my whole being
there was silence, then
time ceases to exist, i
turned a year older
For more Haiku, please visit A Mommy Story!
14 comments:
Wow, I read this a few times and just love it. Nicely done.
** Hugs **
Oh, such lyric! Very lovely Mariposa!
Wow, very meaningful.
well written and happy birthday!!!
Happy Birthday!
I enjoy the rhythm you have captured here.
Happy Birthday! :)
Wonderfully written. This was a pleasure to read!
Happy Haiku day.
You have such a lyrical way with words … this is lovely indeed. Happy belated birthday. I’m glad you’re feeling better.
Hugs and blessings,
Haunting and beautiful. Well done.
PS: you probably don't remember (or you do remember and now you hate me), but I still have your hat done and need to send it to you (think pink crochet). I am sorry that life intruded and I forgot, but I will get to it soon.
Lovely poem. May each new year and day brings greater joy and many spiritual blessings in Christ! May God's love continue to strengthen you through all the changing scenes in life. You are in my thoughts and prayers always. Have a blessed weekends! Hugs.
Time ceased to exist and at the same time you still manage to age? This is a paradox that boggles the mind.
I fear a life that's all absolutes and equations.
How lovely!
Susan
It flows so nicely.....
hope you had a great birthday!
Post a Comment