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Friday, August 22, 2008

The Unspoken...

had life been concise
i'd be counting one to ten
with the universe

had life been precise
things will be in equations
and in absolutes

had life been more fair
i would have existed not
in unspoken word

i heard the sound of
the last chime as it echoes
in my whole being

there was silence, then
time ceases to exist, i
turned a year older

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Anonymous said...

Wow, I read this a few times and just love it. Nicely done.

Anonymous said...

** Hugs **

Jenn in Holland said...

Oh, such lyric! Very lovely Mariposa!

Anonymous said...

Wow, very meaningful.

ya ya's mom said...

well written and happy birthday!!!

Cathy said...

Happy Birthday!

Joyce said...

I enjoy the rhythm you have captured here.

Happy Birthday! :)

Rachel said...

Wonderfully written. This was a pleasure to read!
Happy Haiku day.

storyteller said...

You have such a lyrical way with words … this is lovely indeed. Happy belated birthday. I’m glad you’re feeling better.
Hugs and blessings,

Anonymous said...

Haunting and beautiful. Well done.

PS: you probably don't remember (or you do remember and now you hate me), but I still have your hat done and need to send it to you (think pink crochet). I am sorry that life intruded and I forgot, but I will get to it soon.

Nancie said...

Lovely poem. May each new year and day brings greater joy and many spiritual blessings in Christ! May God's love continue to strengthen you through all the changing scenes in life. You are in my thoughts and prayers always. Have a blessed weekends! Hugs.

Anonymous said...

Time ceased to exist and at the same time you still manage to age? This is a paradox that boggles the mind.

I fear a life that's all absolutes and equations.

sbwrites said...

How lovely!


Wayfaring Wanderer said...

It flows so nicely.....

hope you had a great birthday!